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Sanguine Symphony
Rainfall rumbles! Resounding
In surreptitious silence.
I, in rapture residing,
Shatter the night's soft stillness.
The clear calls of Calypso
Thunder through my soul—thrusting,
Crashing, coiling, collapsing—
My thoughts in tight throat trembling!
The storm-siren celebrates
A rare and regal rainfall!
A song—sanguine symphony,
A rare and regal rainfall!
Rainfall rumbles! Resounding
In surreptitious silence.
I, in rapture residing,
Shatter the night's soft stillness.
The clear calls of Calypso
Thunder through my soul—thrusting,
Crashing, coiling, collapsing—
My thoughts in tight throat trembling!
The storm-siren celebrates
A rare and regal rainfall!
A song—sanguine symphony,
A rare and regal rainfall!
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This is in a style of my own design. I call it a Yog Freslighe (That's pronounced Yog fresh-lee). The basic rules are designed around an Ae Freslighe (eye fresh-lee) with alliteration replacing rhyme.
The Yog Freslighe rules are as follows:
All stanzas are quatrains
Each line must have seven syllables
Each line must contain alliteration
Lines one and three of each stanza must share the same alliteration
Lines two and four of each stanza must share the same alliteration
There is no limit to the number of stanzas
The Yog Freslighe rules are as follows:
All stanzas are quatrains
Each line must have seven syllables
Each line must contain alliteration
Lines one and three of each stanza must share the same alliteration
Lines two and four of each stanza must share the same alliteration
There is no limit to the number of stanzas
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Wow!
Very cool it`s kind of based on Japanese Hycuu (I hope thats how its spelled. I did it phanetically)
Very cool it`s kind of based on Japanese Hycuu (I hope thats how its spelled. I did it phanetically)